今晚何凱文的四六級(jí)作文預(yù)測(cè)講座剛剛結(jié)束，持續(xù)時(shí)間是一小時(shí)40多分鐘，內(nèi)容很多，由于我有點(diǎn)事情耽擱了，在講座開(kāi)始25鐘后才進(jìn)入騰訊課堂，有部分內(nèi)容可能錯(cuò)過(guò)了，但是后面的內(nèi)容都細(xì)心做了筆記。
雖然我考過(guò)四六級(jí)已經(jīng)有一年半了，好像和我沒(méi)有什么關(guān)系，但是老師已經(jīng)說(shuō)明內(nèi)容兼顧了考研，所以我還是認(rèn)真地聽(tīng)了。作為總結(jié)，現(xiàn)在分享給即將在兩天后參加四六級(jí)考試的學(xué)弟學(xué)妹。
如果不知道何凱文是誰(shuí)的，可以去他空間（576728297）和微博（@何凱文）看看這個(gè)男子的實(shí)力，以前是專門輔導(dǎo)四六級(jí)的，現(xiàn)在算得上是考研英語(yǔ)輔導(dǎo)界的“一哥”。
下面進(jìn)入筆記正文：
何老師預(yù)測(cè)四六級(jí)作文的切入點(diǎn)有兩個(gè)：個(gè)人話題和社會(huì)話題。（可能有部分內(nèi)容我沒(méi)聽(tīng)到）
個(gè)人話題：成功品質(zhì)、成績(jī)和品質(zhì)哪個(gè)更重要、幸福話題
一、描述“成功品質(zhì)”的萬(wàn)能句子
引用名人例子闡述：
Instances like Steve Jobs, Elon Musk,and Mark Elliot Zuckerberg(臉書創(chuàng)始人) could be easily muttiplied,but these will suffice(能夠) to show that the trait(特性，這里可以根據(jù)話題代入相關(guān)描述成功的單詞如堅(jiān)持，insitence）discussed here is primarily essential to the.....
（這里還有10個(gè)左右單詞，沒(méi)來(lái)得及抄下來(lái)，腦補(bǔ)吧）
關(guān)于互聯(lián)網(wǎng)方面的：
Jack Ma(馬云),with his glorious(壯麗的、宏偉的) achievement,has proved one case point——critical thinking(批判性思維) and innovation(改革創(chuàng)新) is the bedrock(基礎(chǔ)) to the generation of personal success and business wealth.
關(guān)于個(gè)人可能涉及找工作改變自己：Job-hopping
'succeed'的替代表達(dá)（這個(gè)非常牛逼 是考研輔導(dǎo)班出現(xiàn)的句子）
accumulate wealth,establish career,fit into society and even attain social status.
(寫上去秒殺那些寫succeed的同學(xué)吧)
二、描述“成績(jī)和品質(zhì)哪個(gè)更重要”的萬(wàn)能句子
morality and education are'the right and the left hands'of a nation.Education alone is not sufficient.It should go side by side with morality.The absence of either makes success impossible.Education without morality is dangerous.Morality without education is useless.
三、描述“幸福話題”的句子
To large extend,we are complled(驅(qū)使) by the topic mentioned here to reflect the conventional successes that take up an inappropriately large share of our energy and time. It inspire us to explore the real essence of life and derive guidance from the ever-lasting moral values that truly matter.
We are required to ponder（細(xì)心思索） the limits of old beliefs（信仰） of success,which carries much less value than the immortal（永恒的） values that indeed carries weight to a man's life.
社會(huì)話題
1、環(huán)境（節(jié)約）話題
2、科技對(duì)生活的影響
3、文化傳統(tǒng)和文化交流
4、誠(chéng)信（社會(huì)角度）
文體議論文（論點(diǎn)+論據(jù)，論點(diǎn)由一句話引入，“某某話題引起了人們的廣泛關(guān)注”），出題的提綱：諺語(yǔ)、圖畫或者圖表。
一、描述'環(huán)境（節(jié)約）'話題萬(wàn)能句子
出題角度：haze,smog (霧霾)；E-waste;汽車污染，taffic jam；畢業(yè)季浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象（飲食）；No smoking in public place（北京禁煙令熱點(diǎn)）。
神句：These days the topic of smog or haze has constantly captured wide media attention,occupying the newspaper headline,sparking heated disscussion on the web and wreaking horror among people.
這句話大概說(shuō)的就是霧霾現(xiàn)象引起了社會(huì)廣泛關(guān)注，占據(jù)了各大媒體頭條，在網(wǎng)上和民間激起了熱烈的討論。這是考研寫作例句，寫得非常裝，但這正是寫作需要的。
Environment protection(可以換成其他名詞) is the steel that forges(鍛造) the supporting structure of the society,and the society can not grow steady,if this invaluable（珍貴的） asset is ever neglected（忽視） in any possible manner.
畢業(yè)季食物浪費(fèi)現(xiàn)象描述：
When dinning out,we tend to orde more food than we can eat to show our generosity or hospitality, wich causes plenty good food into the trash.
Moreover,these days,the routine office work has to be discussed in a banquet. And the rondom feasting,more often than not paid by the government,lead to the great deal of food waste.
上面兩句話闡述了兩個(gè)現(xiàn)象，下面的句子是對(duì)這種現(xiàn)象作出結(jié)論：
We Chinese place a high value on the saving,a traditional virtue,and wasting food will be regarded as vulgar taste and the lack of social responsibility.
另外，何老師說(shuō)，對(duì)于網(wǎng)絡(luò)影響這個(gè)話題，因?yàn)槿ツ?月考了，如果今年再考，可能的出題角度是online education的優(yōu)勢(shì)。
以上都是萬(wàn)能的句子，所謂萬(wàn)能就是只要把句子里的關(guān)鍵詞換掉就能套用在許多話題的寫作里。
對(duì)于六級(jí)來(lái)說(shuō)，'節(jié)約'這個(gè)話題很重要；對(duì)于四級(jí)來(lái)說(shuō)，'禮節(jié)'很重要；'成功的品質(zhì)'四級(jí)可能會(huì)靠，對(duì)應(yīng)六級(jí)的是其他品質(zhì)，如誠(chéng)信；而環(huán)境話題對(duì)四六級(jí)，考的可能性都有。
使用方法：萬(wàn)能句子+具體句子，論點(diǎn)擺出+論據(jù)+結(jié)論句子，主題對(duì)于論據(jù)來(lái)說(shuō)很重要（個(gè)人還是社會(huì)）
下面老師給出了一個(gè)具體描寫成功方面話題的例子——珍惜時(shí)間
Life is cherished by everyone,but time by few to the loss of an hour or of a day, forgettingg that our life is the sum total of the days and the hours we live.Especially for the youth,if we allow these morning hours of life to slip away, we shall nerver be able to recoup the loss.As we grow oloder,our power of acqusition gets blunted（遲鈍的）, so that some skills which are not acquired in our prime(最佳的) years will never be acquired at all.
整段話大概意思可以理解吧，最后一句話是說(shuō)隨著我們慢慢長(zhǎng)大變老，我們獲得知識(shí)的能力慢慢變遲鈍，所以一些在我們最美好的年華里未曾學(xué)到的技能將永遠(yuǎn)無(wú)法再學(xué)會(huì)。
我只能說(shuō)，背過(guò)這樣的有水平句子，其他的句子都會(huì)變成將就。
下面是另一個(gè)角度，具體說(shuō)什么因太卡了當(dāng)時(shí)沒(méi)聽(tīng)到，我猜測(cè)是說(shuō)朋友之間相互幫助的，落了一句，只抄寫到兩句：
A single hand that wipes your tears to comfort your failure is much better than cuontless hands that come together to cheer your success.大意是：失敗是給你安慰的雙手比成功時(shí)給你喝彩鼓掌的雙手更重要。
Your forever friend lifts you up in spirits and makes that dark and empty world suddenly bright and brilliant.
何老師在講座末尾說(shuō)的話：不要懷疑這些句子能不能再考場(chǎng)上幫你提分，更不要擔(dān)心如果照搬上去閱卷老師會(huì)不會(huì)反感，閱卷老師不反感作文背句子，反感的是寫的句子和主題不符，這就需要我們?cè)趯懙臅r(shí)候靈活套用就行了，就是換主題詞，所有句子都去背，還有兩天時(shí)間，就背這些句子吧，到考場(chǎng)上就不用擔(dān)心作文字?jǐn)?shù)不夠了，背了只會(huì)剎不住車，不存在字?jǐn)?shù)不夠的問(wèn)題，分?jǐn)?shù)至少提升30——40分。
最后我說(shuō)幾句，我大一下學(xué)期過(guò)四級(jí)，當(dāng)時(shí)還沒(méi)有改革，考了550多，算是中等分?jǐn)?shù)，大二上學(xué)期六級(jí)少一點(diǎn)，因?yàn)闆](méi)有像四級(jí)那么認(rèn)真復(fù)習(xí)，也因?yàn)楦母锪恕Ｋ牧?jí)只要認(rèn)真花一個(gè)月時(shí)間復(fù)習(xí)做題，大概就能過(guò)了，當(dāng)然要多去網(wǎng)上多聽(tīng)那些公開(kāi)課啊，滬江網(wǎng)等到處都是資源，只做那幾套真題有用？你以為你做的時(shí)候是認(rèn)認(rèn)真真分析的嗎？
然而我現(xiàn)在說(shuō)這些好像并沒(méi)有什么卵用，因?yàn)榇蠛筇炀涂剂?，所以，這些句子是你的救命稻草，一個(gè)字，背，喂，就說(shuō)你呢，趕緊背幾句再睡覺(jué)啊。
下午我在空間說(shuō)會(huì)發(fā)一篇關(guān)于PPT修改案例的文章在公眾賬號(hào)里面，后來(lái)問(wèn)了下當(dāng)事人，因?yàn)樗€沒(méi)有進(jìn)行比賽演講，所以現(xiàn)在發(fā)可能有點(diǎn)不太好，所以推遲到下周。
今天也是黃家駒的生日，我白天構(gòu)思好了寫一篇筆記紀(jì)念一下偶像，所以等會(huì)繼續(xù)碼字寫文章，從7點(diǎn)半聽(tīng)課到現(xiàn)在一直在碼字，手酸了。
最后安利一下凱文老師微博里關(guān)于四六級(jí)翻譯和中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化作文預(yù)測(cè)的帖子，干貨哦。
四六級(jí)翻譯：
四六自從上一次改革以后，加大了翻譯的比重；目的就是為了配合國(guó)家英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的改革戰(zhàn)略。過(guò)去的三十年英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的目的是為了把世界介紹給中國(guó)，而接下來(lái)三十年的重點(diǎn)應(yīng)該是把中國(guó)介紹給世界。漢譯英的重點(diǎn)就是在于介紹中國(guó)給世界，那么應(yīng)該介紹什么就成為了我們備考的重點(diǎn)，其實(shí)無(wú)非就是：優(yōu)秀的傳統(tǒng)中國(guó)文化和當(dāng)代中國(guó)建設(shè)的成就以及面對(duì)的一些問(wèn)題。所以根據(jù)今年的熱點(diǎn)，結(jié)合中央編譯局和人民日?qǐng)?bào)發(fā)布的一些資料給同學(xué)們總結(jié)以下的必考重點(diǎn)：
第一部分：今年熱點(diǎn)
1. 電子商務(wù)網(wǎng)站：E-commercialwebsite; E-business website;
2. A成為網(wǎng)絡(luò)消費(fèi)的熱點(diǎn)：A has been in thespotlight of online consumption.A leads onlineconsumption.
3. 網(wǎng)民：net users;netizen; Internet surfers，傳統(tǒng)實(shí)體店不得不調(diào)整銷售策略，以便與在線對(duì)手競(jìng)爭(zhēng)。Brick-and-mortar shops have had to regulatetheir sales strategies to compete with online rivals. 在線教育：online education
4. A預(yù)計(jì)將于..達(dá)到… ：A is expected toreach…by +時(shí)間
5. 與…相比，A的增長(zhǎng)速度為…: A has grown atthe rate of…, compared with …信息技術(shù)的在…中的廣泛使用不僅能夠…而且有助于…The extensive application ofinformation technology in … not only…,but also facilitates…綠色循環(huán)低碳系統(tǒng)：green, recyclableand low-carbon system
6. 全世界人民渴望準(zhǔn)確深入的了解中國(guó)：People from all over the world are eager tohave an accurate and deep understanding of China.
7. 獨(dú)生子女：only child; 集體主義：collectivism;互助友愛(ài)：be friendly andhelp each other;應(yīng)該教會(huì)孩子與人分享的好處：Children shouldbe taught the benefits of sharing with others.
8. 各種慢性病成為了中國(guó)人健康的主要威脅：
A variety of chronic diseases have becomethe major threat for Chinese people.
9. 服裝設(shè)計(jì)師將傳統(tǒng)和現(xiàn)代的觀點(diǎn)融合在一起，創(chuàng)造出了新的時(shí)尚元素。Fashion designers use a mixture oftraditional and modern ideas to create new fashion elements.
10. 經(jīng)濟(jì)發(fā)展進(jìn)入新常態(tài)，精神面貌要有新?tīng)顟B(tài)。China’s economic development has entered anew normal, meaning we must adopt a new mindset.
11. 打造大眾創(chuàng)業(yè)，萬(wàn)眾創(chuàng)新和增加公共產(chǎn)品，公共服務(wù)雙引擎。Weneed to develop twin engines -- popular entrepreneurship and innovation, andgreater supplies of public goods and services – to drive development.
12. 眾多創(chuàng)客脫穎而出We have seen great numbers of makersgiving expression to their talents.
13. 從制造大國(guó)轉(zhuǎn)向制造強(qiáng)國(guó),TransformChina from a manufacture of quantity to one of quality.
14. 為公平競(jìng)爭(zhēng)搭好舞臺(tái),Levelthe playing field for fair competition.
15. 提供更多優(yōu)秀的文藝作品，倡導(dǎo)全民閱讀，建設(shè)書香社會(huì)。We will ensure that more outstandingworks of literature and art are created for the people to enjoy, and encouragea love of reading in all our people to build a nation of avid reader. (Shereads avidly. 她如饑似渴地讀書)
16. 生活從不眷顧因循守舊，滿足現(xiàn)狀者，而將更多機(jī)遇留給勇于和善于改革創(chuàng)新的人。Life never favors those who always followthe beaten path and content themselves with the status quo. Instead, life savesopportunities for people who are willing and able to reform and innovate.
17. 茍日新，日日新，又日新If one can make thingsbetter for one day, he should make them better every day.
18. 禮尚往來(lái)-Courtesy demands reciprocity.
19. 隨著城市交通和汽車工業(yè)的發(fā)展，以及人們生活節(jié)奏加快，汽車逐漸成為人們
的最愛(ài)，私家車的數(shù)量也以驚人的速度增加。
The development of urban transportationand auto industry, coupled with the
increasingly fast lifestyle, makes the car the favorite of ordinary people, and the
private car grow at anastonishing rate.
20. 經(jīng)過(guò)多年的努力，中國(guó)已經(jīng)在…領(lǐng)域取得了可喜的成就，中國(guó)已經(jīng)成為一個(gè)…強(qiáng)國(guó)，贏得了世界范圍的尊重。
Withmany years’ efforts, the gratifying efforts have been made in…,making china apower nation of … that wins respect from all over the world.
第二部分：經(jīng)典話題
1.Sth gradually developed a style which featured …
某物形成了以…為特色的風(fēng)格；
2.Sth can be classified into several categories:…
某物可以被分為以下幾類；
3.Industrious Chinese laboring people勤勞的中國(guó)人民
4.China has made great headway in narrowingthe gap among different social classes.中國(guó)在縮小不同社會(huì)階層間的差距方面也在努力。
5． The core of “harmonioussociety” is“human-centered,” which means theimprovement of people’s livelihood.和諧社會(huì)的核心是以人為本，這就意味著要促民生。
6.We not only aspire to build China into aprosperous, strong and modern socialist country, but also into a democratic,culturally advanced and harmonious one.
我們不只是希望把中國(guó)建設(shè)為現(xiàn)代，繁榮和富強(qiáng)的社會(huì)主義國(guó)家，而且使中國(guó)成為文化先進(jìn)的，民主的和和諧的國(guó)家。
7.During the long course of history, theChinese people have, working with diligence, bravery and wisdom, created a beautifulhomeland where all ethnic groups live in harmony, and developed a great anddynamic culture
在漫長(zhǎng)的歷史進(jìn)程中，中國(guó)人民依靠自己的勤勞、勇敢、智慧，開(kāi)創(chuàng)了民族和睦共處的美好家園，培育了歷久彌新的優(yōu)秀文化。
8.Chinese nation has made an indeliblecontribution to the progress of human civilization. 中華民族為人類的文明進(jìn)步作出了不可磨滅的貢獻(xiàn)。
9.sth has become one of the most popular ……成為了最受歡迎的…之一
Sth has been regarded as one of …被認(rèn)為是…之一
10.We can see…, enjoy…and learn of the legendand anecdotes about…我們能看到…享受到…而且了解到關(guān)于…的傳奇和軼事。
11. sth is a combination of …, dating back to…
某物是…的結(jié)合，其起源可以追溯到…
12. There are some branches of sth , of which Ais one of the most famous.
Sth 有好些分支，其中A是最有名的。
13. Sth，with a history of… years and anumber of …branches/ styles , is animportant part of Chinese traditional culture.… 已有..年的歷史，有好多分支/風(fēng)格，是中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)文化的重要組成部分。
14.High speed railroad is introduced in 2004.With the generous funding from the government, it is rapidly expanding.2004年，高鐵被引入；政府大力支持，發(fā)展很快。
15.sth is familiar to everyone, about whichhowever people’s opinions differ.大家都很熟悉…,但是對(duì)于…仁者見(jiàn)仁。
16.Honor the aged of other family as we honorour own; Care for the children of other family as we care for our own.老吾老以及人之老，幼吾幼以及人之幼。
17.Respecting the aged and loving the young，a the traditionalChinese virtue, has been regarded as thesocial responsibility and behavior norm for thousands years.千百年來(lái)，尊老愛(ài)幼這一中華民族的傳統(tǒng)美德，被當(dāng)做是社會(huì)責(zé)任和行為規(guī)范。
Filial Piety, a Chinese traditionalvirtue, is central to Confucian role ethics.孝道是中國(guó)的傳統(tǒng)美德，被認(rèn)為是儒家角色倫理的核心。
18. Learning without thinking leads toconfusion; thinking without learning ends in danger學(xué)而不思則罔，思而不學(xué)則殆。
19.Chinese characters evolve from pictures andsigns. The style of the calligraphers symbolize their age.漢字由圖畫和符號(hào)演變而來(lái)。書法家的風(fēng)格代表了他們的時(shí)代。
20. China is the birthplace of ..中國(guó)是…的故鄉(xiāng)（信K哥，不掛科?。?/span>
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中國(guó)傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日介紹(作文)
（我其實(shí)一直擔(dān)心四級(jí)又考記敘文體或書信，不考那種典型的三段論，文章所以才有這樣的布防，這段語(yǔ)料可以幫助大家寫書信和介紹。）
The Mid-autumn Festival is celebrated on the night of the fifteenth day of the eight lunar month. It is, in a sense, the Chinese moon festival.
On this night, people walk in the streets to enjoy themselves. They eat moon cakes, which are so called because they are shaped like the moon. These cakes are also set on a table in the open air, meant to be eaten by the goddess of the moon.
It is generally believed that the moon is at its brightest on this night. Many poems have been written about it. Poets never tire of reading and writing such poems, in which the moon has been compared to a looking-glass, a jade rabbit, etc. It seems that Chinese literature is far more concerned with the moon than with the sun.
同時(shí)：
今年北京市高考語(yǔ)文的微作文是：
“亂涂亂貼、違禁吸煙、賽場(chǎng)京罵等不文明的現(xiàn)象，與首都形象極不相稱。請(qǐng)針對(duì)社會(huì)上的某一種不文明現(xiàn)象，擬一條勸說(shuō)短信。要求態(tài)度友善，語(yǔ)言幽默。文體不限?！?/span>
這個(gè)話題和我之前預(yù)測(cè)的禮節(jié)的問(wèn)題不謀而合，所以我覺(jué)得今年四六級(jí)考察禮節(jié)的可能性非常大！
在我家的書柜里放著一本1996年由北京大學(xué)出版社出版的一本《英文模范作文新詞典》這本書影響了好幾代人，里面收錄的范文就有關(guān)于禮節(jié)的，行文風(fēng)格簡(jiǎn)潔明快特別適合這樣的話題。
People all over the world set great regard on good manners. To certain degree, good manners indicate a person’s good education and breeding. In schools, it is part of students’ moral training to develop good manners. A person with good manners always wins praise. On the contrary, people will frown on him if he behaves roughly and impolitely.
There are good manners in which we behave in public places. It is a good manner to offer help to the young, the old and the physically-challenged when they are in need of it. So is it to conduct ourselves politely and keep away from foul language. Besides, we should guard against such minor offences as making a loud noise, casting peels and shells, smoking, and spitting.
If everyone has developed good manners, people will form a more harmonious relationship. If everyone behaves considerately towards others and follows the social ethics, people will live in a better world. With the general mood of society improved, there will be a progress of civilization.
So , always follow the golden rule: Do as you would be done by. Be polite.
Rude words, face-to –face quarrelling , unreasonable fighting , turning a deaf ear to lectures, no thanks for others’ help,etc. could mean nothing but ignorance or ill behavior.
A friendly greeting, a keen invitation, or a short “thank you” reveals one’s internal spiritual world.
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