應試作文殺招
根據(jù)曹其軍老師講稿整理
總原則之一：
應試作文以又臭又長為好：臭——全是廢話（改卷老師不會看你的內容的）；長——是很多廢話的堆積；所以，考研作文要寫到280——300字為好。
總原則之二：
要有固定，漂亮的“外表”
分析歷年試題，考研出題類型不外乎四種：（問題）單向類、（好現(xiàn)象）單向類、雙向類、圖表加前三種。
一、（問題）單向 格式總共是三段
段一：S1+S2+S3+S4+S5 （S——sentence）共5句話，一共60字左右，下面給出每句話可以套用的格式，這些漂亮的格式是一定要牢記和熟背的！
S1是介紹，固定格式有
1.The past few years(decades)havewitnessed us (our society) faced with the issue of……
2. In recent years there has been a growing concern among the general publicover the issue of……
3. Nothing can be more serious (upsetting ,outstanding, meaningful…) than theissue of……
S2+S3運用Flex 技巧進行擴展和包裝，這些Flex 技巧在后面詳細給出，要熟背！
運用statistics:
According to a recent survey made by Dr. Cao, head of sociology department at Beijing University,70%....;and 30%....(在此直接用數(shù)字，不要寫英文，一般寫兩句隨便給
出兩個數(shù)據(jù)足夠)
S4 “同一份調查還表明…（又給出另一個數(shù)據(jù)）
The same survey also shows that +（又一數(shù)據(jù)）
S5 收尾，與S1呼應，“由此可見，…問題已經(jīng)非常嚴重了”
It can be concluded, therefore, that the issue of……h(huán)as become more and moreserious (harmful).
段二：120——140字左右
開頭：S1 : 10 words
1. To account for the above-mentioned phenomenon (issue,tendency), variousreasons (causes) have been put forward.
2.The above problem (phenomenon) may well give rise to some effects(consequences) as follow.
S2+S3+S4: 50 words
開始列舉了，但是千萬不要用那些濫詞：first，second，firstly，secondly，印象分會降低，要用些漂亮的詞，盡可能用短語：
In the very beginning,
+S2
In the first place,
In the second place, In the end,
+S3 +S4
What is more, Last but
S2,S3,S4 在簡單闡述了各自一個觀點之后，就開始進行Flex擴展，擴展可運用Quotation 或是Example達到增加60——80字：
Quotation:
To illustrate the point, let’s take a look at what ……(President Cliton) said inan article :“。。。。”
所以，整個第二段是核心段，基本結構是：
開頭S1（10字） + S2 擴展
S3 50字 擴展 共擴展60-80字
S4 擴展
段三（解決方法，suggestions） 100 words
S1 15 words
1.We should take immediate measures, for if the present situation continues asbefore, serious outcome will come up.
2. It is high time that (immediate measures be taken now.) (such a problem beput an end to.) (a reform be made.)
S2+S3+S4+S5+S6 100 words or so
S2 On one hand, we should urge our government to lay down stricter rules toforbid……
S3 Should anyone dare to break the law, he to she should be put into jail for 5years.
S4 In addition , our government should put in more money to protect (encourage) …….
S5 On the other hand, we should try every means to enhance the public awarenessof the issue of…..
S6 Only through these measures, I firmly believe, will the above-discussedproblem be efficiently resolved.
二、（好現(xiàn)象）單向類
段一 介紹60 字
段二 分析 重要性原因（或結果 benefits）
做法
段三 結論（要重視）
段一 介紹
開頭：Nothing can be more outstanding(meaningful ) than ……
接下來運用的擴展和（問題）單向類相同
段二 分析
(1)開頭： The above phenomenon may wellgive rise to some benefits as follow.
(2) benefits 社會的
經(jīng)濟的
個人的
（3）做法
As the phenomenon is important ,we can approach it in the following ways.
接下來運用擴展技巧
段三 結論
重視 社會生活 （money，awareness）
個人生活 （awareness，我的決心等等）
說明：該現(xiàn)象為較大類的，如 希望工程，就可以加上社會的重視；較小的如 交朋友，信念如明燈，就只用個人生活的做法。
開頭：It goes without saying that dueattention should be paid to the phenomenon.
三、雙向類
（一） A1 VS A2 = contrast “對照”即是一個事物的兩方面做比較，如看電視的利弊，出國留學等等，A1好，A2壞；或是A1壞，A2好；
（二）A VS B = compare 對比 即是兩個事物做比較，如鍛煉是跑步好還是做操好等，A B同好或是同不好
但是兩種題型結構都是一樣的，如下：
段一 擺擂臺，展現(xiàn)“兩”面
段二 回到A（A1）
單向分析 原因，或結果，重要性，做法
段三 回到B（A2）
段四 結尾 選擇類 A or B
表態(tài)類（用死不表態(tài)法） A1 vs A2
段一
1.When it comes to the issue(phenomenon) of ……( tuition fee;TV effects), different people have radicallydifferent opinions. Some people hold onto the idea that
……. Other people ,however, deem that…….
2. As regards the issue of……,there is a popular discussion. Some people … Otherpeople ,however,……
段二
開頭：…… because of the followingfactors.
接下來和單向類的段二相同
段三
開頭 By comparison,
A or B
In the similar way,
By contrast,
A1 VS A2
Quite on the contrary,
接下來和單向類段二相同
段四
表態(tài)類（死不表態(tài)法）
Just as any coin has two sides, it’s no exception with the issue of …. Actuallythe issue is just like a double-edged sword,and we should try every means toavoid its
harmfulness while at the same time, making the most of its advantages.
選擇類
As discussed above, each side has its advantages and disadvantages. If I’mallowed to make a decision, I prefer A to B ( B to A) , for the followingreasons. On one
hand,….. On the other hand,……
應試作文殺招 之二
四、圖表類
此類作文是近年來的熱點，但這類作文只有段一和前三類不同,其他都一樣的來寫.
每一幅圖畫(表),尤其是cartoon, 是要表達一個philosophy(哲理),因此,段一就是描述這一哲理的段落,但是描述的時候只用一到兩句話來“輕描淡寫”說出這個哲理即可。
近年來幾乎考的都是cartoon，但是一定不要陷如誤區(qū)以為要對cartoon進行大量的描寫，象今年考的養(yǎng)老的cartoon，其實就兩句話描述一下畫面就馬上引出你的結論，接著就開
始拿問題類作文的格式一套，so easy！
段一：
一、“從這幅漫畫中我們可以得出這樣一個結論：……”
1.As can be seen from the cartoon,we are able to arrive at a conclusion that ……
2. As shown from the above picture, one point is obvious.
（1）兩張圖
○1Upon carefully observation, we will findthat the two pictures above are closely related in meaning. ○2In the upper one,_____?！?In the lowerone, however,_____?！?The picturesconvey a clear and strong message to us that_____。
（2）一張圖
○1There has been a discussion recently about apicture in which _____?！?_____?！?_____。○4The picturesconvey a clear and strong message to us that_____。
用以上兩個模板對付所有的Describe要求的首段應該不成問題了。有模板撐著，只要在劃橫線的地方隨便對圖片做一些描寫就OK了。
二、如果是graph作文，則一定會有數(shù)據(jù)，就一定會表現(xiàn)出一定的趨勢（tendency，trend）
There has been a gradual(slow,sharp) increase(decrease) in the number (amount,size ) of ……over the past few years (decades).
There has been ……increase……of …….while there has been ……decrease ……of …..
將趨勢描述出來后，再在graph上找出兩個同類數(shù)據(jù)來支持我們的結論就ok了。不要將graph上的所有數(shù)據(jù)都列舉出來。
段二，段三，段四就和單向或雙向作文一模一樣了。
第二段的提問方式目前有兩種：Interrept（點明旨意）和example（舉例）。我們分別“對癥下藥”
（1） Interrept（點明旨意）型的：
○1The picture is based on the realities ofsociety. ○2Just like theperson in the picture, some people_____. ○3_____?！?_____?！?Such cases can be found in almost all walks of life.
(2) example（舉例）：
○1Since many of the philosophic principle weadhere to are adstracted from the daily life, it is easy to find that examplesin the world around us. ○2The ideaillustrated in this picture is no exception. ○3Forexample_____?！?_____。○5_____?！?In fact,everyone has surely seen similar evidence of this truth in the their own life.
一般有模板撐著，在空缺的地方補上一兩句簡單的話就可以了。
關鍵是第三段，大多數(shù)情況是Comment（評論），一般都是就事論事，很難找到通打一切的模板。
這就顯出了曹其軍的高明之處。
據(jù)我們曹爺分析，但凡評論或建議，抽象后就只夠兩個方面了：好的和不好的。
所以只要準備兩個高度抽象的評論段落，就OK了。
好在我們曹爺已經(jīng)為我們想好了。
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（1）對于不好現(xiàn)象的評論：
Considering the current issue and worsening situation, we should call for someimmediate action imposed by the authorities. In other words, our government ofvarious levels must make relevant plans or rules to guarantee a proper orderand justice. Beside, the general public should also be made aware that anyprompt solution is of benefit to all. Therefore, it’s the duty of ordinarypeople to actively participate in the action.
（2）對于好現(xiàn)象的評論：
So far it’s not difficult to see that a positive attitude should be maintainedhere. For one thing, each one of us must be aware of its significance andpossible beneficial effects. This way we can translate into proper action indaily life. For the other, some positive action should also be encouraged inthe whole society.
把上面兩段狂背下來。
這里要說的是，在第三段的提問中，Suggest（給建議）就等于Comment（評論），Implication(聯(lián)系實際)，就套第二段的example（舉例）即可。
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