2017年12月9日
雅思大作文題目
A rise in the standard of living in a country often seems to only benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this difference cause? How might these problems be reduced?
本周雅思作文是關(guān)于生活水準(zhǔn)的提高帶來的城鄉(xiāng)差異等問題，以及其解決方式。本題是2013年10月26日的真題重現(xiàn)。
城鄉(xiāng)差距會帶來哪些問題呢？比如說資源的分配問題，城市會分配到越來越多的資源，越來越先進(jìn)，而農(nóng)村則會相對越來越落后。隨之帶來的影響包括勞動力人口向城市涌入，造成城市資源短缺，就業(yè)市場競爭激烈；而農(nóng)村則會出現(xiàn)教育水平低下，基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施落后等一系列問題。對于城鄉(xiāng)差異，我們應(yīng)當(dāng)加大對農(nóng)村地區(qū)的基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施和教育投入，讓城鄉(xiāng)和諧發(fā)展。
老師筆記
01
Cities have benefited more from the rise of living standard than the rural areas so that the gap between the urban and rural areas has been widened. Consequently, a series of problems related to the urban-rural gap arise.
生活水平的提高，城市獲益比鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)更多，這樣，城市與鄉(xiāng)村地區(qū)的差距就增大了。由此，一系列與城鄉(xiāng)差距相關(guān)的問題就出現(xiàn)了。
解析
（1）本段為引入段，直接進(jìn)入話題，但對題目表達(dá)方式進(jìn)行了簡單改寫。
（2） consequently 結(jié)果
（3） arise （問題/情況）出現(xiàn)
02
As more budgets are invested in the infrastructure in the urban rather than the rural areas, urban population enjoy better educational and medical resources as well as more convenient transportation. To struggle for a better life, labors from rural areas rush into the cities, making the already limited city space more and more crowded and resulting in the prohibitively high cost of living. For those who migrate from rural areas to cities, they may have a hard time adjusting themselves to the lifestyle in cities since it is so very different from their previous country life. As a result, they will face a job market so competitive that it will be extremely difficult for them to find a satisfactory job. Then, with the ever increasing number of jobless young people come more serious social problems like stealing, robbing and other crimes.
隨著更多的預(yù)算投入城市基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施，而不是農(nóng)村地區(qū)，城市人口享有更好的教育和醫(yī)療資源，以及更便利的交通。為了爭取更好的生活，農(nóng)村勞動力涌入城市，使原本有限的城市空間越來越擁擠，導(dǎo)致生活費(fèi)用過高。對那些從農(nóng)村遷移到城市的人來說，他們可能很難適應(yīng)城市的生活方式，因?yàn)槌鞘械纳罘绞胶退麄円郧暗泥l(xiāng)村生活有很大的不同。因此，他們將面臨一個競爭十分激烈的就業(yè)市場，很難找到一份滿意的工作。這樣，失業(yè)青年越來越多，隨之而來的就是更嚴(yán)重的社會問題，比如偷竊、搶劫等犯罪。
解析
（1）本段論述城鄉(xiāng)差異帶來的壞處：空間擁擠，工作壓力，社會問題。
（2）infrastructure 基礎(chǔ)設(shè)施
（3）result in 導(dǎo)致（=lead to; cause）
（4）prohibitively 極端地，令人望而生畏地
（5）adjust oneself to... 調(diào)整自己以適應(yīng)......
（6）competitive 競爭很大的；有競爭力的
03
Another concern is that it is not always possible for children from rural areas to get access to proper schooling in cities. Hence, these children have to be left behind in the countryside, separated from their parents, and eventually find themselves unable to compete with those who grow up in cities. Very unfortunately, as the educational resources keep pouring into the cities, the rural children will remain unable to use them, which means the educational gap between the urban and rural children may exist for quite a long time.
另一個問題是，來自農(nóng)村地區(qū)的孩子往往不能在城市得到恰當(dāng)?shù)慕逃?，因此，這些孩子必須留在農(nóng)村，與父母分開，最終發(fā)現(xiàn)自己無法與那些在城市長大的孩子競爭。不幸的是，隨著教育資源源源不斷地涌入城市，農(nóng)村兒童將繼續(xù)無法使用這些資源，這意味著城鄉(xiāng)兒童之間的教育差距可能會存在很長一段時間。
解析
（1）本段論證城鄉(xiāng)差異帶來的另一個問題：兒童教育的差異。
（2）get access to 獲得；進(jìn)入
（3）leave behind 留在身后
（4）eventually 最終
04
To break the vicious cycle that will lead to a wider urban-rural gap, the government is obliged to balance the development of cities and rural areas by investing more money in the public services such as schools and hospitals and providing more job opportunities in rural areas. Besides, agricultural tourism can be developed to bring income for the rural population. For those eager to move to cities, the government should offer them more training opportunities to ensure they can find their position in cities.
為了打破導(dǎo)致城鄉(xiāng)差距擴(kuò)大的惡性循環(huán)，政府必須通過向公共服務(wù)領(lǐng)域（比如學(xué)校和醫(yī)院）投入更多資金來平衡城市和農(nóng)村的發(fā)展，同時在農(nóng)村地區(qū)提供更多的就業(yè)機(jī)會。此外，還可以發(fā)展農(nóng)業(yè)旅游，為農(nóng)村人口帶來收入。對于那些急于搬到城市的人，政府應(yīng)該為他們提供更多的培訓(xùn)機(jī)會，以確保他們能夠在城市中找到自己的位置。
解析
（1）本段為結(jié)論段，提出解決辦法。
（2）vicious cycle 惡性循環(huán)
（3）be obliged to do... 必須做......
（4）ensure 確保
唐偉勝
新航道特約雅思學(xué)術(shù)顧問
廣東外語外貿(mào)大學(xué)教授、博士
中國知名英語教育專家
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