八、每日佳作賞析
Directions : For this part , you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Young people Should Have Ideats . You should write at least 120 words , and base your composition on the outline given below in Chinese :
1.人，尤其是年輕人應(yīng)該有理想。
2.理想對(duì)于一個(gè)人的意義。
3.我們應(yīng)該如何實(shí)現(xiàn)自己的理想？
范文
(1)" What are you gong to do when you grow up ? " When I was a child , people often asked me this question about ideal . (2) Undoubtedly , every individual , (3) especially a young person , should have an ideal . (4) Hardly can we find any great people with no ideal when they were young .
An ideal (5) is of vital importance to one's growth and success . (6①) On the one hand , an ideal is the target of one's life . (7) Once you decide what your ideal is , you know (8) where to go and which way to take . (6②) On the other hand , an ideal is (9) like the engine of vehicles . (10) Only when we have our own ideals , can we find (11) the origin of energy and enthusiasm .
(12) Whatever your ideal is , careful plan and preparation (13) is vital to its final realization .(2③) Of course , the path (14) from where you are to where you want to get is not always smooth and straight . Therefore , an optimistic , positive mind is (15) indispensable in the process of your pursuing your ideal .
點(diǎn)評(píng)
(1)疑問(wèn)句開(kāi)頭，新穎獨(dú)特，引人注意。
(2)副詞或副詞短語(yǔ)開(kāi)頭，豐富了句式。
(3)意為“尤其，特別”。
(4)倒裝句、否定詞提前引起。
(5)“be of + n .”相當(dāng)于“ be +adj ”.
(6)意為“一方面，……。另一方面?！背Ｓ糜诒硎玖信e。
(7)意為“一旦”。
(8)“疑問(wèn)詞+不定式”充當(dāng)賓語(yǔ)。
(9)比喻使用恰當(dāng)。
(10)倒裝句，“only+狀語(yǔ)”提前引起。
(11)意為“能量的來(lái)源”。
(12)意為“無(wú)論什么”，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語(yǔ)從句。
(13)意為“對(duì)……至關(guān)重要”。
(14)from…to連接的兩個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句的使用凸顯語(yǔ)言功底。
(15)意為“不可或缺的”。
來(lái)源：原版英語(yǔ)網(wǎng)
