2007年杭州市
假如你叫Liu Mei。前不久，你和來自英國的一位中學(xué)生Allen一起討論了一個話題：the ways to learn English better?，F(xiàn)請你根據(jù)他的觀點和你自己的觀點，用英語給你的外籍老師Mr Nunan寫一篇關(guān)于這次討論的匯報材料。
注意：1.開頭和結(jié)尾部分已寫好。
2.可適當(dāng)增加談?wù)撛掝}時經(jīng)常用到的話語，使所寫內(nèi)容連貫。
3.所寫內(nèi)容必須包括上面表格中他的觀點和你自己的至少三個觀點。
4.詞數(shù)：70個左右。
His ideas
Your ideas
1. reading English newspapers
1. ．．．
2. talking with friends in English
2. ．．．
3. seeing English films
3. ．．．
滿分文(一)
Mr Nunan,
Recently I have had a discussion about the ways to learn English better with Allen, a student from Britain. In his opinion, the best ways are reading English newspapers and talking with friends. He also believes that sometimes seeing English films isn't a bad way.
I quite agree with him. However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read. Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country. Finally, learning English grammar well is also a great help.
Liu Mei
點評：本文結(jié)構(gòu)非常清楚，第一段闡述了Allen的觀點，第二段則是敘述自己的觀點。兩段中間用“I quite agree with him.”連接起來，顯得非常自然。同時作者在闡述自己和別人的觀點的時候使用了不同的表達(dá)方式，比如 “in his opinion”, “he also believes”, “I think” 等，避免了重復(fù)，增加了語言的多樣化。本文的銜接非常地成功，比如第二段 “however”, “besides”, “finally” 等連接詞使文章顯得結(jié)構(gòu)非常地緊湊，讀來一氣呵成。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．believe相信2．surfing網(wǎng)絡(luò)沖浪3．information信息4．E-pal電子筆友5．grammer語法
好句
1.However, I think, we can go surfing online, where we can find a lot of information in English to read.
然而，我認(rèn)為，我們可以去網(wǎng)上沖浪，因為在網(wǎng)上我們可以找到很多的英文信息來閱讀。
2.Besides, we can look for an e-pal from an English-speaking country so that we can get to know something about his or her country.
此外，我們可以尋找來自英語國家的電子筆友，來學(xué)習(xí)他們國家的文化。
2007年重慶市
隨著陽光
內(nèi)容要點提示：
1. time for sports
2. kinds of sports
3. change of students’ health and study
4. change of school life
要求：
1.80詞左右，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2. 文中不能出現(xiàn)自己的姓名和所在學(xué)校的名稱等相關(guān)信息。
Sports in Our School
滿分文(一)
Sports in Our School
Sports in our school have changed a lot.Now we have more than three P.E. classes a week.and we have at least one hour to exercise every day.
Students get so excited at these changes.More and more students take an active part in the ball games，running，and jumping on the playground.
Our school life is becoming more wonderful. Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit.What’s more? A healthy body can help us study better and live a happier life.
點評：本文要點非常齊全，三段話分別敘述了題目中要求的四個方面，層次清楚，段與段之間的連接也很自然。第一段主要講我們學(xué)校的運動課和運動時間發(fā)生了很大的變化，第二段是講同學(xué)都很積極地參加運動，第三段主要講運動給校園生活帶來的變化。本文最大的特點就是每一個的開頭都是一個中心句，這樣使得文章大意非常明了，結(jié)構(gòu)也很清晰。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．change改變2．a(chǎn)ctive活躍的3．wonderful精彩的4．relax放松
好句
1.Students get so excited at these changes.
同學(xué)們對這些變化感到非常激動。
2.Doing sports is a good way to relax and keep fit．
做運動是放松身心，保持體形很好的方法。
2007年太原市
學(xué)業(yè)負(fù)擔(dān)不斷加重，學(xué)生的身體素質(zhì)每況愈下。為此，教育部在全國啟動了“陽光
體育運動，，(Sunshine Sports)，提議學(xué)生每天參加一小時的體育鍛煉活動。為了督促學(xué)校積極參與此項活動，某報社面向?qū)W生做
調(diào)研。請仔細(xì)閱讀調(diào)研內(nèi)容，給報社寫一封回信。
要求：·不要出現(xiàn)真實的人名和校名 ·詞數(shù)：60--70
Dear students,
Here are some questions for our survey about"sunshine sports".Please answer them.
Do you have much time to do sports now?
Do you still remember one exciting sports activity you took part in before?Please tell us.
What do you think of "sunshine sports"?
Editor
One possible version
Dear editor,
Yours,
Li Jiankang
滿分文(一)
Dear Editor,
I don’t have much time to do sports now. Too much homework makes me feel very tired.
In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding. Whenever I think of my first skateboarding competition, I feel very excited. I can still remember the day when I was in Grade Seven, we had a competition in our school. Many people took part in it, but I was the winner. I skated fastest that day. I feel very proud.
Doing sports can relax ourselves. But it’s a pity we can’t do that now. I think “Sunshine Sports” is necessary for us students. I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports!
Yours,
Li Jiankang
點評：本文是一篇書信體，文章中的三段話分別回答了來信中的三個問題，要點清楚。在第二段中，作者詳細(xì)地敘述了自己曾經(jīng)參加過的滑板運動，語言真切自然，可見作者對這項運動的喜愛之情。第三段中作者抒發(fā)了自己的觀點，感情真摯細(xì)膩?？偠灾?，本文是以作者的親身體會談了談對運動的看法，可謂以情動人。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．especially尤其是2．skateboarding溜冰板3．necessary必要的4．relax放松
好句
1. In fact, I love sports, especially skateboarding.
事實上，我喜歡運動，尤其是溜冰。
2．I hope I can play outside the classroom every day and enjoy sports! 我希望我能夠在課堂之外多做運動，并享受運動帶來的樂趣。
滿分文(一)
“Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” was launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and students in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some exercises.
I think it is a good way to build up our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective. To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it. I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities.
點評：作者根據(jù)的題目中的提示完成了這篇佳作。本文最大的特點就是要點清楚，表達(dá)通順。很多人在根據(jù)提示完成文章時，常常把一條一條的提示寫的很突兀，沒有連續(xù)性，而本文的作者卻成功地避免了這種問題，運用非常嫻熟地語言表達(dá)功力把各個要點非常自然地串聯(lián)起來。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．nationwide全國2．launch啟動3．strength力量4．effective有效的
好句
1．I think it is a good way to build up our body strength.
我認(rèn)為這是增強體力的一個很好方法。
2．To do physical exercises an hour a day will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it.
每天做一個小時的運動會使我們一生都幸?？鞓罚晕視猿窒氯サ?。
2007年昆明市
提示：閱讀理解B篇文章的情節(jié)使我們感動。你一定也收到過許多禮物，其中你最喜歡的禮物總會不斷地呈現(xiàn)在你的記憶中，它可能來自于你的親人，朋友或老師，在禮物中有他們對你的愛和期待，請你以“A Gift”為題，用英語寫一篇小短文，敘述你收到禮物后得到的啟示和你的感動之情。
要求：
1. 語言流暢，書寫規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60字。
2. 文章中不得出現(xiàn)你的真實姓名，校名，否則以零分計。
3. 短文必須寫在答題卷上，如在本卷中作答，一律不得分。
滿分文(一)
A Gift
I have received so many gifts on my birthdays. But I love the book named Beautiful English best. It was given to me by my mother last year. I like to read it in my spare time. From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty. I also know people should help each other, understand each other and love each other. I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.
點評：作者開門見山地點出了自己最喜歡的禮物，然后詳細(xì)地闡述了這份禮物的來源和為什么喜歡這份禮物的原因。最后作者表達(dá)了自己的希望。本文內(nèi)容很完整，作者層層深入，娓娓道來，展現(xiàn)了一位中學(xué)生的敘事功底。在語言方面，本文長短句結(jié)合，增加了語言的多樣化。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．receive收到2．spare空閑的3．understand理解
好句
1．From the book, I have learned that the world is full of love and beauty.
從這本書中，我學(xué)到了世界充滿了愛和美麗。
2．I think I’ll grow up with the book because it is not only a book but also my mother’s deep love.
我想我會和這本書一起成長，因為它不僅僅是一本書，還代表了母親深深的愛。
2007年湖南懷化市
初中階段的學(xué)習(xí)生活即將結(jié)束。假設(shè)你是張華，身在中考考場，回想自己在父母和師長的關(guān)愛和幫助下的成長過程，心中充滿感戴之情。請根據(jù)表中所列信息，用英語給父母或老師寫一封70詞左右的短信，表示謝意。
感謝
對象
Father
Mother
Miss Gao
參考
用語
take care of, love, help, encourage, cheer up…
thankful, work hard, try to do better…
注意：1. 感謝對象可在父母或老師中任選其一，但請避用真實姓名和校名。
2. 除表格所列關(guān)鍵詞語外，還可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮、舉例并抒發(fā)感受。
3.信的開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。
Dear _______________,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you.
Best wishes!
Yours
Zhang Hua
滿分文(一)
Dear Miss Gao,
Words fail me when I want to express my thanks to you. You’ve taken good care of my studies since I came to this school. When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice. I still remember that once I failed in an English exam and was upset. You cheered me up and told me some good ways to improve my English. With your help, I’ve made great progress in English. I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes.
Yours
Zhang Hua
點評：作者巧妙地把所有的提示詞融入到文章中，完整得敘述了對老師的感激之情以及感激老師的理由。本文銜接自然流暢，前后連貫，層層推進。本文最大的特點是作者使用了很多復(fù)合句， 狀語從句，可見作者對初中階段的句型掌握地還是很扎實的。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1．express表達(dá)2．encourage鼓勵3．upset傷心的4．improve提高5．thankful感激的
好句
1．When I’m in trouble, you always encourage me and give me good advice.
當(dāng)我有困難時，你常常鼓勵我，并給予我很好的建議。
2．I’m so thankful for your love that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
我非常感謝你對我的愛，所以我會更加努力，希望在將來做得更好。
2007年蘇州市
假設(shè)某英語雜志“奧運來了”欄目正在舉辦征文比賽。請你根據(jù)下面的“
奧運會徽”和內(nèi)容要點，用英語以“中國印-----舞動的北京”為題寫一篇短文，參加比賽。
內(nèi)容：
會徽設(shè)計成中國印，名為“中國印-----舞動的北京”；
印中的“京”字代表北京，像個舞者，向世界展開雙臂；
印是紅色的，下面寫有“北京2008”，紅色代表好運；
“舞動的北京”使你想到……..(考生自擬，至少一點)。
注意：
詞數(shù)90字左右。短文的標(biāo)題和開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)；
短文須包括所有內(nèi)容要點，不要逐詞翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使短文連貫、通順；文中不得出現(xiàn)真實的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(奧運會徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.
滿分文(一)
Chinese Seal------Dancing Beijing
The Olympic emblem(
奧運會徽) for the 2008 Olympic Games was shown to the public in Beijing, August 3, 2003.The emblem, named “Chinese Beijing”, was designed as a Chinese seal with the words “Beijing 2008”written below. The Chinese word “Jing” meaning Beijing appears on the seal. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world. The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.
I think“Dancing Beijing”will attract more and more people from the world to Beijing and Beijing will open its arms to people from all over the world in 2008.
點評：作者準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)了提示內(nèi)容所要表達(dá)的意思，雖然看起來有點像翻譯，但是即便是翻譯，也是很到位的，這不是每個初中生都能完成的。在語言方面，作者顯得非常地嫻熟老練，比如be designed to, appear, represent等難詞的運用體現(xiàn)作者厚實的積累，此外，作者還非常自然地使用了狀語，同謂語，后置修飾語等手法使一句話傳達(dá)了很豐富的意思。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1. design設(shè)計2. lively 活潑的 3. important 重要的 4. represent 代表 5. attract 吸引
好句
1. It looks like a lively dancer, opening his arms to the world.
它看起來象一個活潑的舞者，向世界張開它的雙臂。
2 .The seal is red, an important colour for the Chinese people, and red also represents good luck.
中國印是紅色的，對中國人來說，這是非常重要的顏色，紅色也代表著好運。
2007年沈陽市
假如你是China Daily 中學(xué)生版的記者，請根據(jù)下面材料寫篇報道。
背景：這所學(xué)校建于三年前，當(dāng)時有數(shù)百名兒童因貧困而失學(xué)，后來人們?yōu)椤跋Ｍこ?(Hope Project)”捐款200余萬元，當(dāng)?shù)卣眠@筆款項興建了這所學(xué)校。
現(xiàn)狀：教師60人，學(xué)生900人，教學(xué)樓內(nèi)有18個教室，另有1，200平方米的操場，微機室，語音室，圖書館各一個。這所學(xué)校已遠(yuǎn)近聞名，學(xué)生們都很努力，因為是希望工程給了他們學(xué)習(xí)的機會。
滿分文(一)
The school was built three years ago. Before that hundreds of children couldn’t go to school
because they were very poor. Later the local government was offered over two million yuan by people for “Hope Project”. Thus the school came into being.
Now there are sixty teachers and nine hundred pupils in this school. You can see the bright
teaching-building with eighteen classrooms, a computer room, a sound lab and a library. In front
of the building pupils can play on the playground with a size of 1,200 square meters
The school has been well-known in the nearby area. The students there study very hard
because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
點評：同樣，這是另外一篇根據(jù)提示信息完成的文章，作者使用了非常準(zhǔn)確地語言把提示信息簡潔明了地表達(dá)出來。本文表達(dá)通順流暢，基本無語法錯誤，作者能夠準(zhǔn)確地翻譯提示信息中的一些專有詞匯，如computer room, sound lab, 可見作者平時還是有一定的積累量。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1. government 政府 2. offer 提供 3. pupil 小學(xué)生 4. bright 明亮的
5. meter 米
好句
1. Thus the school came into being.
因此學(xué)校就成立了。
2. The students there study very hard because they all know that it is “Hope Project” that has given them the chance to go to school.
那里的學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)都很刻苦，因為他們知道是希望工程給了他們上學(xué)的機會。
2007年四川樂山市
最近，教育部啟動了"陽光
體育"運動，建議全國中小學(xué)生每天鍛煉一小時，讓他們健康、快樂。此項活動受到廣大學(xué)生的歡迎。李華對所在學(xué)校學(xué)生參加活動的情況和反映做了一 個調(diào)查。請你根據(jù)下面調(diào)查表的內(nèi)容，幫他給校報寫一篇報道。報道的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出。詞數(shù)， 80詞左右.
Interviewees(調(diào)查對象)
ActivitiesFeelingsReasons
most studentsplay sportsinterestedhave lots of fun
many studentsskip rope(跳繩)happykeep healthy
some studentstake a walkrelaxedenjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom
a few students worriedhave no enough room(空間)on the playgound;have no enough time to finish homework
The “Sunshine Sports" program is warmly welcomed in our school ,Nearly all the students have taken part in it.
No matter what students think about the program， all the students like the idea which is to make students happy and keep them fit at the same time.
滿分文(一)
The" Sunshine Sports" program is warmly welcomed in our school. Nearly all the students have taken part in it. Most students are interested in playing sports. They think they have lots of fun. Many students are happy with skipping rope. They believe it really keeps them healthy. A few students are relaxed while taking a walk. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.
No matter what students think about the program，all the students like the idea which is to make them happy and keep them fit at the same time.
點評：本文最大的優(yōu)點在于，作者在傳達(dá)不同的學(xué)生為什么選擇不同的運動的時，所使用的表達(dá)方式，比如They think，They believe，They find it good等，避免了重復(fù)，展現(xiàn)了語言的多樣化。 這并不是每個同學(xué)都能做到的，很多同學(xué)在表達(dá)觀點時很容易犯重復(fù)的毛病，通通使用I think，這樣使文章看起來很乏味，因此，本文作者豐富的表達(dá)方式有很大的借鑒意義。
積累卡片
英漢互譯
好詞
1. warmly 熱烈地 2. believe 相信 3. fresh 新鮮的 4. fit 健康的
好句
1. They find it good to enjoy fresh air instead of staying in the classroom.
他們發(fā)現(xiàn)比起呆在教室里，呼吸新鮮更有樂趣。
2. However， a few students are still worried that there is not enough room on the playground and they may not have enough time to finish their homework.
然而，一些學(xué)生仍然很擔(dān)心操場上沒有足夠的任他們施展的空間，因為他們擔(dān)心他們可能完不成作業(yè)。
2007年江西省
中學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)時間長、壓力大，專家建議學(xué)生每天課后應(yīng)采取適當(dāng)?shù)姆绞椒潘勺约?。某英文報“學(xué)生習(xí)作”專欄正在就“學(xué)生適當(dāng)?shù)姆潘煞绞健边@一話題進行征文。假設(shè)你是二十二中初三(3)班的班長，最近你對班上同學(xué)課后放松方式進行了調(diào)查。請根據(jù)表格提供的調(diào)查信息和要求寫一篇短文向該報投稿。
對 象
二十二中初三（3）班
人 數(shù)
60人（男：31人；女：29人）
常用放松方式
1.看電視（30人）
2.玩電腦游戲（12人）
3.聽音樂（8人）
4.進行
體育鍛煉（5人）
5.沒有時間放松（5人）
你的觀點
哪一種（些）放松方式是適當(dāng)?shù)模?div style="height:15px;">
I am the monitor of Class3,Grade 3,No.22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class. __________________
I am the monitor of Class 3, Grade 3, No. 22 Middle School. Recently I have made a survey of the students in my class on ways to relax after class.
There are 60 students in my class (31 boys and 29 girls).Different students have different ways to relax. Half of the students often watch TV. 12 students like to play computer games while 8 enjoy listening to music.5 students think doing sports is a good way and another five are too busy to relax.
As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax. In my opinion, watching TV or playing computer games is not a proper way to help us relax. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes. Besides, it can help improve our health. Therefore, I often play pingpang.
點評：第一段和第二段是敘述表格中的信息，第三段是表達(dá)自己的觀點。在敘述信息時，作者使用了簡潔地語言把意思準(zhǔn)確地傳達(dá)出來；在抒發(fā)自己的觀點時候，作者詳細(xì)地闡明了自己的觀點。詳略得當(dāng)，銜接自然，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，不愧為一篇佳作。
1. recently最近 2. suffer 受痛苦 3. pressure 壓力 4. proper 正確 5. improve 提高
1. As we study long hours every day and suffer from too much pressure, every student should choose proper ways to relax.
2. I thing taking exercise is a proper way because it can rest our brains and eyes.
